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again, it rises, that stupid sun,
trying to brighten my nurtured overcast.

no matter how i try -
roll over in bed, bury my head.

it still shines all optimistic.
go away.  leave me alone.

can't you see i need to suffer...?

suffer!


llp - dA - nov2012
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:iconhalcyonshores:
halcyonshores Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The title alone won me over.
And the rest.. sealed the deal.

:rose:
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:iconalapip:
alapip Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you like 'goofy', must be. ;)
[i can do that]
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:iconhalcyonshores:
halcyonshores Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can see you!!! Hi Pip!

I can do goofy too and I hope I will always be able to. :hug:
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:iconalapip:
alapip Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hi :wave:
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:icondeeclear:
deeclear Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
God I do feel like this every time I go outside into the sun. For some reason even though I am a summer baby I am all Seattle weather. I love the greys and dark blues of the sky when it seems like it it is gonna rain.
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alapip Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i pretty much like all kinds of weather, Dee.
but, because i'm not enough of an outdoors
person i don't get all the sun i should.

that's another habit i'm working on.

thanks for the favs!

:hug: pip
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:icondeeclear:
deeclear Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am not a sun person either. welcomes pip!! any time.
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:iconavfc4me:
Don't be smudgin' my grey with your happy happy yellow, now...

Clever, Pip, as usual!

I wish I had time to properly cultivate a proper melancholy but just when I think I might have one under wraps to let loose, the Monsters come and stomp it out with all that rawr and 'get up, Mom!'...

*sigh*. One of these days?
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alapip Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
and, mom is always there,
right where she's needed,
and loved.

thanks for the favs, Kari!

:heart:pip
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:iconfuzzyhoser:
FuzzyHoser Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm a lover of the sun, myself. But I can def understand this one. I have days when I want it to just go away and shine on someone else's sadness. Nice work, Pip!
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