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we theorize the ways and whys of his desire
haunted, daunted, buried by past
felt upon sight of beauty of
our numberless distaff half
callow, hollow heart-ed, fallow
as he was, sadly is, still
stricken via various vivid visions
virtually, literally 'gone up in smoke'
keys to heaven tossed, lost
but, in solitude he knows no hell
being immune, numb to suffering
nonetheless, he is damned
he sees he is damned
i see... i am damned
llp - dA - sep2012
haunted, daunted, buried by past
felt upon sight of beauty of
our numberless distaff half
callow, hollow heart-ed, fallow
as he was, sadly is, still
stricken via various vivid visions
virtually, literally 'gone up in smoke'
keys to heaven tossed, lost
but, in solitude he knows no hell
being immune, numb to suffering
nonetheless, he is damned
he sees he is damned
i see... i am damned
llp - dA - sep2012
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What Is a Poet?
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A Family Built On Wedgies (Part 4)
(This story contains sexual content, wedgies and incest. If any of that makes you uncomfortable, do not read. All characters are 18+) Well, it's happened. Everyone in the family knows how everyone else feels about wedgies. I must admit, I wasn't expecting them to all love them. That caught me off guard. But now everyone knew and the past few days have been amazing. Mom has been on an absolute wedgie rampage. She's been yanking on any waistband she sees, including her own. Even I've been on the receiving end a few times but Raven and Ellie have definitely had more than me. Though that's to be expected since they want them much more than I do. For example, just a couple days ago, mom woke up first out of all of us and decided that the best way to get us up was wedgies. She started with me so that I could help with Raven and Ellie but that doesn't mean she went any easier. I'm not sure what she did exactly when she came in but she grabbed my underwear gave a monstrous yank up my back and to my neck before they started to rip. I immediately woke up and grabbed her wrist to get her to stop. "I should've known you were going to start doing that" I say as I sit up and fix myself only to realize she made a massive hole. I stood up to change and actually looked at my mother who wasn't exactly dressed. She was dressed in just her bra and panties but it seemed like she didn't exactly want her bra on. It was loose and hardly covering her but it did part of its job "You really should've. It's been so annoying to have to suppress my love for all things wedgie but now that everyone knows, everyone is getting some" She said smiling brightly. "Which reminds me..." She quickly turned around and crouched down to put her hands on her knees and stick her ass out. "...Get pulling. I'd do it myself but you can apparently do it so much better than I can" She instructed giving her ass a gentle shake "Can I change my own underwear first? They're kinda torn" I say with a faint smirk, wanting to make her wait as some weird punishment. She sighed and stood back up. "Fine but be quick. Take too long and I'll just rip them off you" She said, keeping her back to me so that I can change I smirk and change my underwear to an unripped pair. However, when I was done, I decided to keep it to myself to both make her wait longer and I didn't want her to prepare for it. She needed to feel the full thing. I crept up behind her this time and in one swift motion, grabbed her panties and rocketed them up her back and immediately to her neck, just as she did to me but she had a much different reaction. Instead of pain and discomfort, she squealed, blushed and eventually began to moan. "Is this what you wanted?" I asked with a laugh as I pull the panties higher and over her head to cover her eyes "O-oh yes it is~" She moaned out as she pressed her knees together. "I could never get a wedgie to feel like amazing on myself~" "Well I'm always more than happy to wedgie you" I say as I start to actually get dressed in a casual day in attire "A-as much as I'd love to stay here and get even more wedgies, I want to wake up your sisters" mom said, shifting to keep her atomic wedgie on but still be able to effectively walk "I was hoping you'd say that. Let's get Raven first. I think the three of us can give Ellie what she really likes" I say as I leave my room with my now atomic wedgied mother We enter Ravens room quietly and I have to cover my mouth to stop myself from laughing. There were ripped pairs of panties absolutely everywhere. Dozens of pairs around the room. Mom almost went back to parenting mode when she saw it, immediately thinking of all the money those ripped pairs cost. That was until she remember that Raven is an adult and has to buy her own now. "So, either side of the bed, grab a side and go to town?" I suggest as I walk to the opposite side of the bed. Raven was on her side with her back to the door so I when she woke up, she would be looking at me "Yep. I'm thinking double atomic or rip them" She whispered as she peeled the blanket off her adopted daughters figure I can't help but blush and look away from her now because...well...unlike mom, Raven wasn't wearing a bra at all so her breasts were in full view. I took a deep breath and grabbed a hand full of the front of her panties while mom grabbed two handfuls of the back. We counted down from 3 quietly and then we both shot the panties towards her head Her eyes immediately shot open and she let out a moan that made even my mother blush. She blushed brightly when she saw me and had to decide whether she wanted to try and stop us from pulling more or covering herself....or apparently just doing nothing because she just laid there, letting us pull the panties towards her head. After about 30 seconds of pulling and listening to her moans of satisfaction, mom and I get her in the perfect double atomic. The fabric has stretched in a way that meant her breasts went through the front leg holes so everything was on display. At this point, she had yanked the covers back over her and shivered in joy "Morning" I say simply which results in getting my leg slapped by my now wedgied sister. "Let's let her get dressed and comfortable" mom sajd as she left the room. I began to leave but raven grabbed my wrist to stop me. She pushed the covers off her and grabbed the central strand that split her in two. She pulled roughly over and over before ripping it apart, causing the wedgie to fall apart. "W-what a wake up~" She said as she panted, her face red and her eyes with a pleasured daze in them "We figured you'd enjoy that" I chuckle as I cross my arms. She sat up and swung her legs over the bed away from me. She stood up, giving me a perfect view of her ass before going to her dresser and getting dressed. "So was that yours or mom's idea?" She asked once she had another pair of panties on "Moms actually. She woke me in pretty much the same way" I reply, averting my gaze from her naked figure "Oh don't bother looking away. You've seen them before and it's not like we're blood relatives" She said as she finished getting dressed in a loose shirt "Even still, you're still my sister" I say looking back "Whatever. Just know that there's nothing wrong with it" she said as she approached me. "Well if mom woke you up, and you both woke me up, are all three of us waking Ellie?" She asked with a smirk "That was the plan" I say smirking back as we both left the bedroom "Well there you are. I was wondering where you were" mom said "Just wanted to talk to my brother" Raven said innocently before walking towards Ellie's room, followed by mom and then me. We enter her room prepare to give the biggest of the three wedgies given so far. I knew what Ellie liked. She wanted them hard and fast. The only problem was getting three of us around her bed. Eventually, we decided that mom would hold her ankles while Raven and I grab the legholes. We all pull and Ellie wakes up to her perfect wedgie. We get into position and count down. Mom grabs her ankles gently while raven and I grab the sides of her panties. Ellie was laying face down and now I think I know why. She's awake. And I know it because I just saw her smile and peak. But she'll get her wish. Her being awake doesn't mean we don't want to wedgie her. Once we reach zero, all three of us yank. Ellie's panties are immediately pulled over her head and as I suspected, she reacts a bit too quickly. We had barely pulled and she was squealing in joy as her panties erupted up her back The three of us laugh as Ellie lifts her head and tries to grab Raven and me. She giggles as her face goes red as we all pull harder, causing the panties to start ripping but we weren't done. Raven and I pulled the panties over her face and under her chin before mom flipped her over onto her back and lifted her off the bed by the front. She viciously bounced her before giving her a double atomic and holding her in the air like a fisherman who just caught their biggest fish yet. Ellie kicked her legs a bit but eventually gave up and just laughed. "I'll get you guys back for this" She said "Oh I doubt it" Raven said as she watched I just stand back and laugh. The whole family finally had something in common and while unusual, I've never seen the family closer. Mom is noticeably happier, Raven has grown closer to me and Ellie is just having fun. All in all, wedgieing raven was a great idea.
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thank you, Max.
rewritten/retitled/reposted - sep20/2012 - pre-critique.
changed nuance in the first line - sep20/2012 - post-critique.
edit - swapped 'way' and 'why', moved 'buried'' - sep23/2012.'
edits - inserted a line and several other nuancial words - oct3/2012.
edits - removed most punctuation - one or two small changes - repost, just because - dec03/2017
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thank you, Max.
rewritten/retitled/reposted - sep20/2012 - pre-critique.
changed nuance in the first line - sep20/2012 - post-critique.
edit - swapped 'way' and 'why', moved 'buried'' - sep23/2012.'
edits - inserted a line and several other nuancial words - oct3/2012.
edits - removed most punctuation - one or two small changes - repost, just because - dec03/2017
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Vision Originality Technique Impactvision - he sees her, she is beyond his reach, he wants her anyway, and the fantasy of love, where he will have her, may be all that remains as we age - we cannot know, so we theorize...
originality - what can be original about sex? it's been around. Now, there is innuendo - "size of is desire" "desire buried" and then the idea is "haunted daunted" as if plumbing might no longer work. "keys to heaven - tossed". this is all nicely done; multilevel stuff.
technique - the non-metric rhyme, repetition, and alliteration is good; it is off-kilter and fits as deconstructionist with the diminishing 4-3-3-2-1 form.
impact - "I see... I am damned" - twist the whole thing around; see a little of yourself in others; piercing perception; a sign of maturity, and in spite of the now-obvious depth, the whole thing is fun to read